CrystalTalian

Anybody who's seen my gallery recently know about my Pokemon Tree of Life project. There's a few Pokemon I'm stuck on, or I'm thinking about moving. So I was hoping to get some opinions! Mr. Mime/Jynx: Primates? Right now I have them in a sort of 'life essence' group. I'm not sure if they belong there or in with primates. If I were to make them primates, I was thinking tarsier and slow loris respectively. Aerodactyl/Haxorus/Tyranitar: Reptiles or dragons? I'm working on putting dragons in a group of their own. These are Pokemon that I'm not sure belong in with the dragons . . . or in with dinosauria. Thoughts? Avalugg: I have a group for

And totally going crazy. So I'm gonna vent a little steam here. So I've done many Nuzlockes, and attempted at least three times to write a story. I keep losing focus and giving up, which depresses me. So I'm trying again, but this time, I'm not releasing any part of the story to the public until it's completely done. Mostly to keep myself from lurking for feedback before I continue writing, ya know? But here's the thing. This is my first time ever trying to write a narrative this way. At my start, I was a roleplayer. Cooperative story writing type stuff. Then I moved on to (attempting to) write my own story and post them up in public plac

So . . . I've tried a couple of times to write a Nuzlocke story, but I'm never quite happy with them. I think part of my problem is that I just don't get any feedback. I'm my harshest critic, so of course I tend to think my work is imperfect but then I don't know how to fix it/what to change. so i was thinking about seeing if anybody would be willing to beta read my next attempt and give me some feedback? I think it'd help my creative process a lot. I'd be writing every other week because of my work schedule. My only real requirements would be a good understanding of basic grammar and the ability to give constructive feedback. Thoughts?